tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1381422866529333535.post1412938256322758656..comments2023-08-21T18:13:48.159+08:00Comments on wired4news: Ateneo gets athletes ready for UAAPUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1381422866529333535.post-69355253166918244032007-07-10T21:24:00.000+08:002007-07-10T21:24:00.000+08:00Thanks for the feedback, Karla. :)Thanks for the feedback, Karla. :)wired4newshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847924047006394920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1381422866529333535.post-36911948494667753502007-07-03T22:35:00.000+08:002007-07-03T22:35:00.000+08:00Heya! The article itself was okay, however, i thin...Heya! The article itself was okay, however, i think it could have be improved by interviewing athletes... or the people connected to athletes. After all... it was Cheer Rally for athletes. <BR/><BR/>La lang. :D just some thoughtsAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12415802827765190106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1381422866529333535.post-79947020723421026132007-07-02T15:01:00.000+08:002007-07-02T15:01:00.000+08:00Pretty straightforward news item, Allan. You know ...Pretty straightforward news item, Allan. You know what could have spiced this up? Photos. Your story is visual, with the posing “ala-300” and the mass of almost 600 students, it could have been better with photos.<BR/><BR/>Remember, online journalists of today are multimedia reporters, I will tell you Tuesday guys how AFP and other wire reporters and how even we do it sa Inquirer.net. everyone is armed with cameras for video and audio and photos, plus a laptop and a mobile device.<BR/><BR/>On Tuesday we will go through a minor style items in you story, you will be the one to correct your own story.<BR/><BR/>Erika, same with Allan, will edit her own story too. Erika, since yours is a feature article, please refer to the comments I made earlier and redo the story, bring the file on Tuesday July 3 and we will refine your articles on class.Leo Magnohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11488487347482604191noreply@blogger.com